This is, perhaps, a little unfortunate

[indri]

Have a look here. If you don't see it straight away, search for "Weetabix".

And there's only 18 days until Writercon! How am I going to get the Illyria fic done in time if I'm writing this slowly? Argh!

Scurries back to the blue meanie...

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[indri]

Yes, I'm a bit worried that misguided primatologists would find themselves reading Sparmony, *shudder*

I read your story on con_critique (was too tired last night when I saw it on your LJ). Much enjoyed it, especially the characterisation of Darla. Not sure that I'll be able to give much in the way of proper critique in the next few days though as I have work do's on in the evening.

[shapinglight]

Well, maybe the primatologists will enjoy the Sparmony? I suppose you really have to know the characters to understand it, though, which is a shame because it's such a well-written story.

Thanks for your kind words about my story. I don't know if anyone is going to manage to critique it. It is rather long. I am beginning to wonder if maybe there should be a limit to how long things can be on the group, simply because we keep being presented with huge long chunks of prose which are quite hard to digest and then comment on. I suppose I am guilty in that department too.

There's no doubt that it's easier to critique (is that really a verb?) something short.