indri | (no subject)

I've just reread the Dru fic. The plot's all there and the post-NFA sections are rough but useable. The flashbacks though are jarring as the POV is an omni third, which was a deliberate decision at the time, but quite wrong in retrospect. I'm going to have to throw out all those sections, which is a pity as they make up the bulk of the draft so far. Still, I think I know how it needs to be recast. I don't want to say how yet, as I may not be able to pull it off, but it should be fun to write. New and challenging and fun. If it weren't past midnight I'd probably start now.