Concritathon

[indri]

Text pinched from peasant_ and deadsoul820.

This is my post for peasant_'s Concritathon. Anyone who wants to give me public concrit for Descent is very welcome to do so here. Anyone who would rather send the concrit privately, my address is archaeoindri@yahoo.com.

According to the rules of the concritathon:

Concrit is Constructive Criticism. This means that it must point out at least one, preferably more, flaws in the story as well as at least one, preferably more, good points in the story. It must also be written so as to inform the author of your opinion without hurting their feelings.

Ta.

Comments

[girlguidejones.livejournal.com]

Hi there!

I'm assigned to you, but will be a day late getting it in. I have a rather odd work schedule which can get in the way of really important things like fanfic reading. Heh.

I must say that after reading the above comments I am really looking forward to your story. It looks like I will need to search for flaws, :) so I will have a stern go at it!

~GGj

[indri]

Hi. I'm just writing a quick thank you note for now for your critique. I won't be able to respind properly until later in the week, but I really appreciate the time you've taken to do this.

More when I have a mo'!

[girlguidejones.livejournal.com]

No hurry...I'm leaving for a long weekend beginning Thursday, so won't be about to respond in any case after that point till next week. I just admire people like you who will put their writing up and *ask* people to find something wrong. In your case, as others have said, there isn't much to find!