Concritathon

[indri]

Text pinched from peasant_ and deadsoul820.

This is my post for peasant_'s Concritathon. Anyone who wants to give me public concrit for Descent is very welcome to do so here. Anyone who would rather send the concrit privately, my address is archaeoindri@yahoo.com.

According to the rules of the concritathon:

Concrit is Constructive Criticism. This means that it must point out at least one, preferably more, flaws in the story as well as at least one, preferably more, good points in the story. It must also be written so as to inform the author of your opinion without hurting their feelings.

Ta.

Comments

[estepheia.livejournal.com]

Hi Indri,
I took over from EntreNous who had to drop out.
I am afraid I won't be able to post my concrit on time. I started working on your piece, but because of a nasty cold that makes all my RL chores so much more exhausting, I didn't get as much done as I wanted. Weekends are always tough because the entire family goes to chess tournaments and dance practice, but I think that I should get your concrit done by Monday. I hope that's okay. :-)

I read your story before and liked it very much. I will write you a general critique, but I'll also send you a beta'd file, if that's okay with you.

Have a good weekend.

[indri]

No worries about the deadline. I only managed my concrit in time because I was confined to bed for part of the week.

I will write you a general critique, but I'll also send you a beta'd file, if that's okay with you.

Both of those sound fantastic. Thank you very much.

[indri]

Thank you for the comments -- you have given me much to think about. Due to various commitments, I won't be able to respond at length until later in the week, but I did want to let you know how much I appreciate this. It's very interesing.