Concritathon

[indri]

Text pinched from peasant_ and deadsoul820.

This is my post for peasant_'s Concritathon. Anyone who wants to give me public concrit for Descent is very welcome to do so here. Anyone who would rather send the concrit privately, my address is archaeoindri@yahoo.com.

According to the rules of the concritathon:

Concrit is Constructive Criticism. This means that it must point out at least one, preferably more, flaws in the story as well as at least one, preferably more, good points in the story. It must also be written so as to inform the author of your opinion without hurting their feelings.

Ta.

Comments

[azdak.livejournal.com]

Tell you what then, if speakertocustomers turns out to be right and you don't get anything useful out of the Thon, I'll reread Descent with the deliberate intention of picking holes and if I manage to find any I'll let you know. But maybe you'll just have to accept that your best work is, you know, perfect :-)

[indri]

I'm sure he's wrong. (The Walsh bit is confusing, for starters.) But if I don't, I would gladly take you up on your offer. You're one of the most perceptive readers and viewers I know. I always enjoy reading your analyses.