Date: 2011-04-05 04:34 pm (UTC)
shapinglight: (Giles and Ethan)
From: [personal profile] shapinglight
So Ethan wants to keep Ripper's secret for himself? Very interesting. Also, I really like the way you've written the Ethan/Ripper/Adrienne triangle (if you can call it that). Poor Ripper really doesn't know what he's landed himself in.

One small thing, 'a second home near Devon' sounds odd, Devon being a county rather than a town. How about 'in Devon'?
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